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After everyone had gathered around the table in VG's room, which was surprisingly roomy, the briefing began.  There was one empty chair around the table; Tishar was supposed to be there, but he had been to busy with a date or some such thing.  He said he needed privacy or something, VG hadn't really been listening.  Charade was looking around, interested in the walls.  They were different than the ones she had painted with her voice.  Now they were striped with deep red hues and slightly lighter crimson.  The floor was black, complimenting the red-burgundy ceiling.  All the light in the room came from candles burning on the table and around the bed, creating a heady scent of vanilla in the room.  The bed too was new, and following the theme, it had deep red satin sheets and pillows with a plush black comforter over the top.  The entire room had a romantic and sexy atmosphere that evoked feelings of love and classy amour.

Authenti stared, her mouth agape, at the epitomic example of interior design before her.  "Jesus VG, what the hell are you planning on doing here?"

VG looked at her expectantly, "What is the first thing you would do if you had the chance to meet yourself?  A younger, more naive version of yourself, as it happens."
I really like this section. I worked hard on finding the perfect description for that room. Anyway, enjoy your tiny hint at what the plot is about, and stay tuned for more coming soon.
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:iconsamiclayvivianmel:
XD Now I have something else to just shove in the middle of my NaNo. (I've given up on what little plot I had and am trying to write whatever comes to mind. Now I feel like writing abot Charade, I've been neglecting her.)
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vgmaster831 Nov 30, 2010  Student Writer
Cool, very cool.
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:iconsamiclayvivianmel:
Nothing interesting happened in that bit... but I wrote some gratuitous smut (completely unrelated to Charade, just happens to be in the same document)! :D
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vgmaster831 Dec 1, 2010  Student Writer
Oh my gods. Smut from you would be like gay fanart from DaVinci. I must read it.
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:iconsamiclayvivianmel:
XD A flattering comparison, but it's not actually very good. Here: [link] (the first and the last stories are what you want, prolly, and it's het, sorry, but yeah.)
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vgmaster831 Dec 2, 2010  Student Writer
I had to skip over some parts because of the scary womanly parts, but I like your penises, very vague. Great writing though, I liked your smut in general. Your characters do seem to have a bit of trouble "finishing" though... poor guys.
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:iconsamiclayvivianmel:
XD It's just because I'm too lazy and/or bashful to write those parts.
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vgmaster831 Dec 3, 2010  Student Writer
Well, I think you did fine.
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:iconauthenti:
"I WOULD PUNCH HER IN THE EXPRESSION FACE WITH MY PUNCHING FIST"

jk. |D if you're not sure, she would probably take her for a flight and tell her how fucking wonderful/awesome/kickarse her life is going to be

or whatever you have already come up with works too

this sounds amazing and i cannot wait to read moar <3
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vgmaster831 Nov 21, 2010  Student Writer
The answer is ALWAYS "Have sex with her."
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